[Mkguild] My frist attempt (AKA, STRIKE ONE!!!)

[Shazer Fox]

I really liked this setup for your character, made into the form of a journal entry.  Can't wait to see the rest!

It seemed to flow fairly well, but I did notice a few sentences that were a bit jumbled, but you probably already know this  :o)

Shaz


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