[Mkguild] Part 1 Earning His Stripes.

[Ryx]

A nice beginning.
A lot of missing quotation marks throughout making the separation between diologue and prose a little dodgy.
For a first-person work I find it nicely readable and formatted (for mail) sufficently to read easily (seems that mail proggys are evil about wiping the niceness of a tab), though I am seldom a great fan of first-person perspective.

Though I beg to ask... Misha going out on Long patrols with raw recruits??  Isn't he busy enough at the Keep alone, much less out on rotation?

And while on the trail, the tiger might be well advised that cracking bones can be heard, and identified as 'something BIG eating' by pretty much every unpleasant scavenger for a long way.
And.. Lutins are scavengers.