[Mkguild] MK Story - Extended family!

[C. Matthias]

>My Muse has been pushing me to get this small story written for a long
>time. No grand plots or great battles. Just a little slice of normal
>life at Metamor Keep. Showing that amidst all the great events the most
>important things are the little ones. In this case three of them.

Awesome!  Just a couple of comments.

>    Andre and Jenn Maugnard were close friends of Misha and Caroline.
>Andre had lost a leg during the Yule attack. Loosing that limb hadn't
>effected other parts of his body and his wife Jenn was pregnant.

This sentence gives the impression that Andre go Jenn pregnant after 
Winter Assault.  But we know that Jenn was pregnant just before 
Winter Assault.  The story where Charles, Misha, and Rickkter (with 
girlfriends in tow), go visit them for dinner was when the pregnancy 
was announced I believe.

>    Misha and Caroline pushed through and got a good look at the Keeps
>newest residents. The three small bundles of fur were curled up and
>sound asleep. They looked so small to the fox.

Given that these would be the first furry children born in Metamor 
(at least on record), I think there'd be more comment made on the 
fact that they are furry children.  Most of the people present 
wouldn't have seen any before.

Other than that, good little story and a wonderful addition to the MK 
Universe. :-)

May He bless you and keep you in His grace and love,

Charles Matthias