[Mkguild] Cycle of Journies - Requiem of Vengeance (4 of 4)

[Kamau]

A very powerful piece Ryx.  I recall having recently seen something in 
the archives about this fellow and mention of the bear with the 
Canticles as I did some research.  It was good to hear how the bear was 
freed (or hopefully so in a later tale).

The only thing I saw was a couple places where 'the' or other such 
connectors were left out.  Otherwise it seemed a well crafted tale.

Kamau


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