[Mkguild] MK Past Present and Future part 7

[C. Matthias]

>
>    "But could I have really forced you here if you truly didn't want to
>come? You didn't seem to put up much of a fight."
>
>    "Would you like me to? I could punch you in the chest right now if want."
>
>    Edmund sighed and stepped back. "All right my friend. Never again will I
>force you to go anywhere. I won't ask you to come to these woods again."
>
>    The two friends continued forward into the darkness without another word
>passing between them.
>
>
>*************
>
>End part 7

I finally got back to reading this and I hope to get through more of 
it soon.  The discovery of the arena and the trapped animal ghosts 
and the combatants was a nice touch.  The growing antagonism between 
Edmund and Stealth is interesting as well.    I'm not quite sure 
where you are going to take these threads yet, but I confess I'd like 
these two cheetahs to hold their tongues for a little bit so they can 
find Nest.

May He bless you and keep you in His grace and love,

Charles Matthias 


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