[Mkguild] A Day In The Life II
C. Matthias
jagille3 at vt.edu
Sun Jun 21 21:08:41 UTC 2015
I like so far how you are showing Janelle's power
and how she puts it to use. Going into the Watch
to help stop those who want to harm her fellow
Metamorians is a great reason and way to use her
Tapping there. The names you use for the powers
almost describe themselves! Well done there!
I like your description of Srgt. Tibble too. I
can see the boar sitting back there snorting and
snuffling as he goes through his
paperwork. Officious to a fault, or so I imagine.
And naturally I enjoyed your descriptions of
Janelle and the trouble her big tail causes
her. Thump thump thump as she goes up and down
the stairs. That would become rather grating very quickly I imagine!
May He bless you and keep you in His grace and love,
Charles Matthias
At 08:34 AM 6/16/2015, Jack Moore wrote:
>AN: More of it, now with magic
>
>Every morning while I wait for my son's nanny, I
>look at myself in the mirror. Every day I see
>the same thing. I see a blue pebbled head with
>ocean-colored eyes and spines creating a crest
>down the back. I see dull front teeth but sharp
>back teeth, a reverse of human mouths.
>I see a clean blue tabard and cloak, though both
>are beginning to show their age. The white
>lantern in the center is stained despite many
>cleanings and there is no way currently to acquire a new one.
>
>I see a massive tail that my legs can't hide. It
>always sticks out straight like a rudder and
>from it comes a fin. It cuts up my tail like a
>blade and tapers off at the small of my back.
>
>After this I give my thanks to Eli, for the
>chance to do what I love even in this form and
>to live as a Follower in relative peace. It's
>helpful to remember not everyone has it as good as I do.
>
>As a member of the Watch (official name is the
>Wardens but no one calls them that) I have to
>work and watch over one specific area in theory.
>In my case I work in Keeptown, under two sergeants and one lieutenant.
>I know what you're thinking my dear listener.
>"Keeptown has a police force?" Yes as a matter
>of fact all parts of the Metamor Valley are
>supposed to fall under the protection of the Watch.
>
>The Seneschal (called Justicar by everyone)
>controls the Watch, and the Watch supposed to
>provide order. The problem comes from lack of
>funds, lack of manpower and no lack of work.
>
>"When I become Justicar I can change that." I
>adjusted my cloak. "The Watch needs more
>exposure." The most frequent thing I say in life
>is "When I become Justicar", it's a reminder of the future I'm working towards.
>
>My home is a two-room dwelling on the second
>story of a dingy stone building near the
>Shoeshine Inn. It's not much of a place to live,
>but it's snug for both of Kaysar and me. Above
>all else it's cheap. The stairs to my home are
>on the side of the building. Every time I step
>out, I'm greeted by the dawn sky.
>
>Today was purple. For a moment I just stood
>there taking it in. The air was cool and the breeze gentle.
>
>"Good day today." I stretched my neck. "I have a
>lot of work ahead of me." I took a moment to
>verify I had all I needed. I had my belt, my
>short sword, my club and a coil of rope. "Perfect. Let's get going."
>
>One joy of being a Sailfin Lizard is the fin
>makes it impossible to bend my tail straight up.
>I can bend it sideways and that's the only way
>to lift it off the ground. When I walk on stairs
>that doesn't help, each step smacks me on the way up or down.
>
>As I walked down the rows of buildings, I kept
>my mind open. No emotions or thoughts Brushed
>against my mind. All quiet. I feel jittery. Something will go wrong today.
>
>When you're a member of the Watch you think that
>every day. Today is the day someone will finally
>push a sword into your gullet. Stop. It's the
>nightmare. Every time I have that nightmare I get this way.
>
>I was distracted enough by my thoughts that it
>only took a strong burst of outside emotions to
>shake me free. I glanced up. I'm in the market square? How did I get here?
>
>Keeptown does have its own market of sorts. It's
>a small area near the town square, with a well
>and lots of dirt. Everyday different people pull
>up carts and set up booths to peddle overpriced wears.
>
>It was still early so the market was almost
>completely empty save for an okapi woman in a
>belted brown dress with an apple cart and a
>figure in a gray cloak with his back to me. I
>could feel fear radiating off of the okapi as
>she undid her coin purse. Nonetheless I reached
>out and Tapped on the gray cloak.
>
>Before I go on, let me explain a bit about
>myself. As I mentioned at the beginning, I have
>a few unique gifts; talents that belong to me
>and a select few like me. I don't know how to
>describe it other than my soul is partially unstuck in my body.
>
>This means that I can reach out from my body and
>"feel" spirits. I can pull them into my body,
>this is Channeling. It lets me draw a spirit
>into me, gaining things from the spirit depending on how far in I pull them.
>But I can also reach out to living people. When
>I do this I brush against the surface of
>someone's mind. If I lightly touch it, I can see
>the thoughts currently at the top of their mind. This is called Tapping.
>
>Tapping is the most basic level of my magic
>applied to a living person. The deeper in I go,
>the more I can affect their mind but the more
>they will feel it. Tapping is easy and tells me all I need.
>
>Stupid, stupid bitch! Just give me your coins!
>Gotta go...Gray cloak's mind was a storm of
>panic. I pulled my club free from my belt and moved in.
>
>"Give me your coins!" Cloak snarled to the
>Okapi, "Then I'll-"He turned around just as I
>swung at him. Cloak jumped back, revealing a
>weasel inside. He held a knife in his right hand.
>
>"I am Corporal Janelle of the Metamor Watch." I
>said. "You are under arrest for attempted
>robbery." Weasel cloak swung at me with the
>knife but he moved like a sloth. He thrust like
>an idiot from a story, which I easily dodged.
>
>"I ain't getting arrested." The Okapi watched
>both of us but did what she should have, stayed
>away. The weasel wasn't a threat to me but if
>she interfered it could be trouble.
>
>"You'll have to-" I swung again, this time
>connecting with the side of his head. A spray of
>spit and a tooth came out of his mouth as he
>collapsed in a heap at my feet. I pulled the
>short length of rope from my belt and tied his hands together.
>
>When I joined the Watch there was discussion
>about creating cuffs for each Warden. They'd
>magic ones that could adjust to the size of the
>criminal and would stop someone from turning
>feral. This never happened and I've found a club
>to the head to be more effective.
>
>I made sure that the ropes were tight. The
>weasel was out cold but he'd be fine. I turned back to the okapi.
>"Did he hurt you?" I asked. "I'll be taking him
>in for this; you will need to accompany me to
>give a report." The okapi's snout had contorted
>into a look of pure rage. Her eyes, though, were
>fixed on me. "Is something wrong?"
>
>"Yeah something's wrong." She took an apple from
>her cart and flung it at my head. This one I
>couldn't avoid. "This is the fourth time I've been robbed!"
>
>"I'm sorry for you." I rubbed my forehead and
>kicked the apple away. "I was not there for
>those; I was here for this one." As a Warden,
>you learn being honest and calm is the best
>option. No matter what you feel, keep your tones
>neutral or warm. Keep eye contact with the
>victim. When they lash out at you, forgive them.
>
>It's going to happen a lot.
>
>"Why wasn't anyone here the other three times?"
>She hoisted her skirt over her right leg,
>revealing a thin white scar. "You see this? This
>happened last time, then they stole my purse. Why weren't you there then?"
>
>"I'm sorry for you." I pulled the weasel up to
>his feet. "But this time I was here." The okapi
>snarled more profanity at me but I ignored it.
>"I need you to come with me to file a report."
>
>"You kiddin' me?" She barked a laugh. "No. I
>gotta sell apples, I don't sell I don't eat."
>
>"Okay then." I swallowed. "How about this, I
>will come back later when on patrol to take your
>statement. That way you can stay with your
>cart." I could feel the anger radiating from her but she nodded.
>
>"I'm sorry you feel the Watch has let you down."
>
>"Ha! I don't feel it; they have let me down.
>They let everyone down. When was the last time you saw a Warden here?"
>
>"Right now ma'am."
>
>"Why even bother warden? You can't change shit.
>You think you'll solve all the crime? You're wasting your time."
>
>"I'll be back later." I pulled the moaning
>weasel to his feet. "Have a nice day."
>
> From the moment I put on my tabard until I take
> it off again I am on duty. Every action and
> every interaction I make reflects upon the Watch.
>
>The Metamor Keep Watch should have membership
>numbering over a thousand. If there are five
>hundred people in the whole Watch it would surprise me.
>
>The Watch is in desperate need of people. Since
>we are so undermanned, every Warden matters.
>Every Warden must reflect positively on the
>Watch. Their actions may be the only actions most people see from the Watch.
>
>That okapi saw nothing. I dragged the weasel
>that was dead in my hands. I did everything the
>way I should but she is mad at us. And she's
>right, though, the Watch is undermanned. How can I fix anything?
>
>"I fix it one person at a time, one crime at a
>time." I pulled him up to two legs. "This is not
>the time to worry; this is the time to act." The
>anxiety retreated. I shook the weasel awake.
>
>"Wha-wuzza?"
>
>"Time to shine." I said. "We're here."
>
>Here was a featureless long two-story building.
>It had a big wooden door on the front. That door
>away always locked and wouldn't open to anyone except a Warden with a key.
>
>The real way in was through the back door.
>Inside you'd find a maze of cramped hallways,
>overstuffed rooms, six holding cells and a mass of Wardens.
>
>The main HQ of the Watch was in Euper. The
>problem is that crime doesn't happen exclusively
>in Euper but all throughout the Keep and the Valley. So what do you do?
>
>The Watch set up a series of Watch Houses,
>places run by a Lieutenant that Wardens work out
>of. Watch Houses are unmarked, unassuming
>buildings that most people would walk by a
>thousand times without noticing. They're
>designed to not be found by people, if you need
>the Watch speak to a Warden on the street. As I
>approached one of these houses the weasel in my
>hands began coming back to life.
>
>"What the...where are we?"
>
>"Shut up." I dragged him in through the wooden
>back door, making sure to not bang him against
>the doorway. "I am advising you not to struggle.
>Attempts to do so will be hazardous to your health."
>
>"Eat me!" The hall we entered to was cramped and
>poorly lit. The gray stone walls were filthy and
>the wooden ceiling was too close to both our
>heads. The only light came from small lanterns
>mounted along the sides. This gave the hallway a
>striped feeling as we moved in and out of the light.
>
>The problem with having groups of Wardens
>stationed outside of inconspicuous buildings is
>that they have to be inconspicuous. So making
>them large is impossible, they have to be small.
>Dragging suspects through them can be a task itself.
>
>"Hey Janie." A blur in a blue tabard said to me as I passed a doorway.
>
>"Hello Ian." I dragged the suspect past the only
>staircase in the building until I reached an
>alcove beside a door. The alcove had a mass of
>green with tusks sitting behind a desk, working
>on a leather bound book. The weasel was
>beginning to squirm now so I used both arms to move him.
>
>"Hello Sergeant Tibble. Bringing this one in for
>attempted robbery and murder."
>
>"Cell's are all empty, will stick him in the
>first." The drooping mass working on a ledger
>was my superior Sergeant Tibble. Tibble was a
>dark brown boar whose great coat barely fit. His
>left tusk was broken and his left partially cut
>off, with a scar leading connecting them.
>
>His remaining ear drooped, as did his tufts of
>fur. His brown eyes were red rimmed from
>exhaustion. Were I still a mammal, my eyes would
>look the same. We were all tired and it wasnât getting better.
>
>The Watch needed manpower.
>
>My Sergeant is a good man, no matter what I
>thought or how annoyed I might be. We needed
>someone to keep track of all the records and
>incoming prisoners. Tibble was good at it but
>there was so much work to do, this was all he
>did. I donât think he remembered the last time he lead an investigation.
>
>I rarely saw Tibble outside of the alcove. Most
>of the time he was keeping records of which
>prisoners were brought in, sorting out patrol
>details, recording who got assigned to this
>House and how much Mean Justice was dispensed on any day.
>
>Tibble stood up and moved his shaggy bulk over
>to the door. The only key was on his belt but
>our Lieutenant also had a copy. He opened the
>lock and let me scoot inside, following right behind.
>
>"Lady I am going to get out of here" The weasel
>snarled, "And I am going to kick your ass!"
>
>"Attempted murder falls into the category of Low
>Justice; you will be tried and punished
>accordingly." The stone hall held six rooms with
>mesh iron doors. We tried bars once but a rat
>slipped through them so they made mesh doors for us.
>
>"Gonna kill you all." I untied the rope and
>pushed him inside. The weasel stumbled about as
>Tibble relocked the door. "Do you think you
>scare me? I ain't scared a shit! I am-
>
>Tibble shut and locked the main door. "Good job corporal."
>
>"Thank you sir." He returned to his alcove,
>pulling out another identical leger from his oak desk. Now he was panting.
>
>"You've got a few choices for patrol today." The
>big distinction between a warden and corporal is
>a corporal has a bit more choice in their daily
>assignment. They can choose from a selection of
>places where they go on patrol. That might not
>sound like much but wardens always get to patrol the worst parts of the Keep.
>
>"Is the market square area available sir?"
>
>"Yep, yours." He scribbled that into the ledger.
>"Warden Remmie is with you this morning, you know the drill." I sighed.
>
>"Yes sir." I saluted and went to find my partner for the morning.
>
>AN: The idea for Watch houses was based on a
>book I read on Medieval France, the chapter on
>policing. I've been wondering why the Watch
>never gets attention so I figured the reason is
>they're undermanned. At least I can get more drama from that.
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