[Mkguild] Memories of Madeline

[C. Matthias]

Hi Jack,

This story does a nice job of giving us a better sense of who Nemo 
is.  While we do not learn the details of his loss, only that it 
occurred and that he blames himself (at least in part) for it.  I 
suspect tat his hatred for the Ecclesia is also part of this loss but 
it's not clear how, especially since it seems to be suggested that he 
was once a knight of the Ecclesia.  There is a great deal of 
bitterness here in him, for only bitterness could have led him to 
work for such a disreputable man.  It is clear that he sees James as 
a way to redeem himself too (at least to me it seems clear).

Of course, we still don't know what Nemo is changing into but I guess 
we'll have to wait a little bit longer to be certain.

Thank you for sharing this tale; it is great to see your pen in action again!

May He bless you and keep you in His grace and love,

Charles Matthias

At 08:13 PM 1/13/2016, Jack Moore wrote:
>AN: Something short I had rattling around my brain. Not heavily 
>edited because school is starting back. I have little time sadly. As 
>always leave feedback.
>
>Memories of Madeline