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Oh. Wow. <BR>
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That story gave me an irrepresible fit of the giggles. The protagonists who just sort of blindly bumble from one adventure to another always bring warm fuzzy squeals. Seriously, I loved this.<BR>
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There were parts where it seemed there could have been more exposition or interaction between the characters, and instead the plot just seems to dutifully head from point A to B, so it feels like there were some missed opporitunities for some characterization that I would have been exited to see. But even as it was I loved this story and you absolutely HAVE to expound upon this. Expound! I commandeth thee! :)<BR>                                           
!DSPAM:4b206fea327491804284693!
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