<div dir="ltr">I'm going to change the ending of Malakai and Sargosa when I get a moment, I've been a little sore for a bit as in addition to these four, I write a FreeRIDE story and wore myself from the long day. As a result the ending of Malakai & Sargosa is admittedly, lazy, lackluster, and rushed. Still looking for feedback on these tales btw, especially The Inescapable Cult as I fear it jumps the shark a few times and The Study Of Women as I could see how it would be controversial Thank you - HawlSera </div><div class="gmail_extra"> <div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Oct 16, 2014 at 8:00 AM, <<a href="mailto:mkguild-request@lists.integral.org" target="_blank">mkguild-request@lists.integral.org</a>> wrote: <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Send MKGuild mailing list submissions to <a href="mailto:mkguild@lists.integral.org">mkguild@lists.integral.org</a> To subscribe or unsubscribe via the World Wide Web, visit <a href="http://lists.integral.org/listinfo/mkguild" target="_blank">http://lists.integral.org/listinfo/mkguild</a> or, via email, send a message with subject or body 'help' to <a href="mailto:mkguild-request@lists.integral.org">mkguild-request@lists.integral.org</a> You can reach the person managing the list at <a href="mailto:mkguild-owner@lists.integral.org">mkguild-owner@lists.integral.org</a> When replying, please edit your Subject line so it is more specific than "Re: Contents of MKGuild digest..." Today's Topics: 1. My most productive writing day ever (<a href="mailto:kyle.vernon@gmail.com">kyle.vernon@gmail.com</a>) 2. Re: My most productive writing day ever (christian okane) ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Message: 1 Date: Wed, 15 Oct 2014 17:15:04 -0400 From: <<a href="mailto:kyle.vernon@gmail.com">kyle.vernon@gmail.com</a>> To: <a href="mailto:mkguild@lists.integral.org">mkguild@lists.integral.org</a> Subject: [Mkguild] My most productive writing day ever Message-ID: <<a href="mailto:CAGvZ7Xn2UrOjYZwjnw3vzKW2EnOC91rJPfNQFBpW0ZGspDERhw@mail.gmail.com">CAGvZ7Xn2UrOjYZwjnw3vzKW2EnOC91rJPfNQFBpW0ZGspDERhw@mail.gmail.com</a>> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" I have not written one Metamor Keep story. No... I WROTE FOUR! Note this is not the conclusion to tales of the Transblade, let's just say it's the end of the prologue. Yes I realize I'm really jumping the shark with the flesinoir and some of the darker and more strange content. But still enjoy, let me know what you think I am now listing these in chronological order <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UJbziuy6slFG2_buujGTryTofQt-oPvcGU2zBJHqqT0/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UJbziuy6slFG2_buujGTryTofQt-oPvcGU2zBJHqqT0/edit?usp=sharing</a> - The Study Of Women for anyone who wanted a follow up to Between Us Girls. It's short, to the point, and very cheesey. <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T2Rr5nPwKV-ZR7FOLmbmAaVmLZ5DrQsP5O6OVYCu3AE/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T2Rr5nPwKV-ZR7FOLmbmAaVmLZ5DrQsP5O6OVYCu3AE/edit?usp=sharing</a> - Flesinoir Truths - Yeah those Flesinoir I've been talking about their strange beliefs about flesh, want to meet them? Also Horses and Transgender Women galore! <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mblqIRN4cJqEeG3iptJhEgZcRHeMxk1BhLQCWnU_1C0/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mblqIRN4cJqEeG3iptJhEgZcRHeMxk1BhLQCWnU_1C0/edit?usp=sharing</a> - The Inescapable Cult, one of my darkest and strangest stories. I don't know how I feel about this one <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TnmlVYXWFANvkiw6Lc_5cJMgumE0JxqkC_64lvFodrE/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TnmlVYXWFANvkiw6Lc_5cJMgumE0JxqkC_64lvFodrE/edit?usp=sharing</a> - Malaki and Sargosa - How do you know you've written your characters into an unwinnable situation and need to pull a resolution out of your butt. You write Malakai and Sargosa This has basically never happened from me before. Four new Metamor Tales all at once! I also wrote one FreeRIDE story while writing these four and I'll put that on the Shifit when I'm not so tired. Feed back is definitely requested... especially for "The Inescapable Cult", that one's a little.. freaky deaky. -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <<a href="http://lists.integral.org/archives/mkguild/attachments/20141015/7889c302/attachment-0001.html" target="_blank">http://lists.integral.org/archives/mkguild/attachments/20141015/7889c302/attachment-0001.html</a>> ------------------------------ Message: 2 Date: Thu, 16 Oct 2014 02:28:20 -0400 From: christian okane <<a href="mailto:chrisokane@optimum.net">chrisokane@optimum.net</a>> To: <a href="mailto:kyle.vernon@gmail.com">kyle.vernon@gmail.com</a>, <a href="mailto:mkguild@lists.integral.org">mkguild@lists.integral.org</a> Subject: Re: [Mkguild] My most productive writing day ever Message-ID: <003e01cfe90a$61426640$23c732c0$@net> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Four? Wow! You have been busy! Chris The Lurking Fox From: <a href="mailto:mkguild-bounces@lists.integral.org">mkguild-bounces@lists.integral.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:mkguild-bounces@lists.integral.org">mkguild-bounces@lists.integral.org</a>] On Behalf Of <a href="mailto:kyle.vernon@gmail.com">kyle.vernon@gmail.com</a> Sent: Wednesday, October 15, 2014 5:15 PM To: <a href="mailto:mkguild@lists.integral.org">mkguild@lists.integral.org</a> Subject: [Mkguild] My most productive writing day ever I have not written one Metamor Keep story. No... I WROTE FOUR! Note this is not the conclusion to tales of the Transblade, let's just say it's the end of the prologue. Yes I realize I'm really jumping the shark with the flesinoir and some of the darker and more strange content. But still enjoy, let me know what you think I am now listing these in chronological order <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UJbziuy6slFG2_buujGTryTofQt-oPvcGU2zBJHqqT0/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UJbziuy6slFG2_buujGTryTofQt-oPvcGU2zBJHqqT0/edit?usp=sharing</a> - The Study Of Women for anyone who wanted a follow up to Between Us Girls. It's short, to the point, and very cheesey. <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T2Rr5nPwKV-ZR7FOLmbmAaVmLZ5DrQsP5O6OVYCu3AE/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T2Rr5nPwKV-ZR7FOLmbmAaVmLZ5DrQsP5O6OVYCu3AE/edit?usp=sharing</a> - Flesinoir Truths - Yeah those Flesinoir I've been talking about their strange beliefs about flesh, want to meet them? Also Horses and Transgender Women galore! <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mblqIRN4cJqEeG3iptJhEgZcRHeMxk1BhLQCWnU_1C0/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mblqIRN4cJqEeG3iptJhEgZcRHeMxk1BhLQCWnU_1C0/edit?usp=sharing</a> - The Inescapable Cult, one of my darkest and strangest stories. I don't know how I feel about this one <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TnmlVYXWFANvkiw6Lc_5cJMgumE0JxqkC_64lvFodrE/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TnmlVYXWFANvkiw6Lc_5cJMgumE0JxqkC_64lvFodrE/edit?usp=sharing</a> - Malaki and Sargosa - How do you know you've written your characters into an unwinnable situation and need to pull a resolution out of your butt. You write Malakai and Sargosa This has basically never happened from me before. Four new Metamor Tales all at once! I also wrote one FreeRIDE story while writing these four and I'll put that on the Shifit when I'm not so tired. Feed back is definitely requested... especially for "The Inescapable Cult", that one's a little.. freaky deaky. -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <<a href="http://lists.integral.org/archives/mkguild/attachments/20141016/b3485347/attachment-0001.html" target="_blank">http://lists.integral.org/archives/mkguild/attachments/20141016/b3485347/attachment-0001.html</a>> ------------------------------ _______________________________________________ MKGuild mailing list <a href="mailto:MKGuild@lists.integral.org">MKGuild@lists.integral.org</a> <a href="http://lists.integral.org/listinfo/mkguild" target="_blank">http://lists.integral.org/listinfo/mkguild</a> End of MKGuild Digest, Vol 91, Issue 15 *************************************** </blockquote></div> </div>