<div dir="ltr"><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">So at the prompting of my friend Jack, I wrote a story for MK. I'd appreciate any and all feedback. This story takes place in the year 719.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“What
are you working on this time Lodo?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">I
turned my head to see a platypus—it was my friend Turik. I smiled and put down
the cloth I’d been working on. “Something interesting! It ought to be a nice
surprise. At least I hope. What brings you here today, my friend?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">My
workshop doubled as a house and was near one of the more secluded areas of the
Valley. This suited me well, since I wouldn’t want to disturb any of my
neighbors with my racket and odd hours.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Do
I need a reason to visit? Besides, if I don’t make sure you’re okay no one else
will. I brought some food by the way.” He hefted a large basket on the table
and I set down my tools. We quickly made a nice table with sandwiches and tea.
I put the extra away for later.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“I’m
glad you came. I do miss company. I really wish my apprentice had stayed.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“As
I recall she was more than eager to stay, but her parents were less than happy
when you turned her fur blue.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“It
was only temporary! It’s not like what happened to that one poor fellow at all!”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Turik
chuckled. “That may be, but I don’t think they wanted to take chances. Your
magic lanterns are making a fortune, by the way. I don’t suppose you have
more?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">I
waved casually to a couple of boxes. “They’re not technically magic, you know,
just alchemical. Strontium carbonate for red, calcium chloride for orange, sodium
nitrate for yellow, barium chloride for green, copper chloride for blue, a mix
of strontium and copper for purple, and magnesium for white. The only real
magic is making sure the colors don’t burn out too soon. Other than that
they’re just paper lanterns with metal bottoms filled with chemicals and fire.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“All
the same, no one’s seen anything like them before. Which leads me to another
question what is <i>that</i>?” He pointed to
cloth I’d been working on.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“A
cloth.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Yes,
I can see that it’s a cloth. In fact it is a white cloth. It is also a very,
very <i>long</i> piece of cloth. What I’d
like to know is why you want or need a piece of cloth that size.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Ah,
well, help me bring this outside to my barn and I will show you.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">We
hefted the cloth out to the barn where several other strips of different colors
were. There was also a huge wicker basket easily large enough for two or three
people to fit in it. I moved the red strip and purple strip so they met with
the edges of the white one. Taking up a paint brush I slathered the ends with a
special glue. I then took a few dozen needles (already attached to thread) and
set a spell on them. They immediately began sewing for me.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“If
any of the seamstresses catch you doing that you’ll be tarred and feathered!”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“What
they don’t know won’t hurt them. Besides, that spell is <i>not</i> easy. I only came up with it out of desperation after my
apprentice had to leave.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“So
are you going to explain?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Yes,
well, this is like one of my lanterns. See, here’s a ceramic holder for fire
and around the metal area here I’ll attach the cloth. The hot air will fill up
the cloth and it should rise up into the air!”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Have
you considered visiting the local healer, Lodo? Are you feverish?” Turik asked
in a voice of concern. “You’ve been working really hard, maybe you need a
break?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“I
am not sick Turik! Nor am I delusional. Here, help me out and I’ll show you!” <span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">With
obvious hesitance, Turik helped me move the basket and the cloth out once the
sewing was done. I made sure to use a long, strong length of rope to secure the
basket to the ground. It took a while for the two of us to attach the cloth to
the metal circle I made. I hopped into the basket, lit a fire and started
fanning the hot air into the cloth with my wings. Slowly, very slowly, it began
to fill up, lifting off the ground. <span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Ye
gods, it’s actually working!”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“See,
I told you! At last, I can fly!”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Lodo,
you’re a pterodactyl. You could <i>always</i>
fly.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“I
can now fly without using my wings.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Okay,
I’ll give you that. How are you planning to get down?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“I
attached this string to a panel of vents near the top. Since hot air causes it
to rise, I should be able to make it descend by letting the air out.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“I
see, and controlling the direction?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Uh,
well, I have some plans for that later. They’d involve Misha making something
for me. I’ve got the plans worked out.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Uh
huh. And until then?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Well
I could always get out and push.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Turik
slapped his head. “There are so many things that can go wrong with that.” He
sighed and hopped into the basket next to me just as it was beginning to lift
off the ground. I blinked and he chuckled at my surprise. “You didn’t seriously
think I was going to let you go up in this thing alone, right?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Well,
I wasn’t sure. That rope should hold us in place.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Let’s
hope. I don’t fancy being stuck in the air.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">It
took a long time, but it was finally full. We began rising as I fed the fire
and soon the trees and my barn were far below. Eventually the rope became tight
enough to hold the balloon in place. All of Metamor Valley was visible from
this height. While I’ve flown over it any number of times, it’s an entirely
different experience to see it while still instead of always having to move.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">We
could not just see the Keep, but as far north as the Giant’s Dike and as far
south as Castle Grenier. The mountains rose on either side of us, high and
proud with frosty white caps, but below the forests were a lush green over the
lighter green of grasses. The river was a silvery ribbon to the west, shining
and shimmering in the sun. I could even make out people walking around, working
on their farms, and so on.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“I…”
Turik tried to speak, but the words caught in his throat. Tears were running
down his face. I gave him a hug and he returned it. We stood there for a while
next to one another, looking out over the world.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">The
wind began blowing gently, and I was glad that I had attached the basket to a
rope. It pulled in the direction of the wind. I really would need to see Misha
about the device I wanted to ensure this went in the direction I wanted.
Suddenly, however, there was a snap and we began drifting over the Valley.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Lodo,
why are we moving?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Uh,
my guess would be that the rope broke somehow. Most peculiar.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“So
help me Lodovico Buonarroti, if I end up dead because of you I will find a way
to haunt you for eternity!”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Now,
now Turik. We’re in no danger. I’ll just pull this cord and we’ll be fine.” I
pulled the cord. It broke. Turik’s look could have soured new cream. “Really,
we’ll be fine! I’ll just make the fire go out!” I chuckled nervously and put a
stopper on the top of the fire. The silken bag, however, would probably not
lose its air soon.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Turik
sighed. “Only in Metamor Valley could a platypus and a pterodactyl get stuck in
the air in a… what are you calling this thing anyway?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“A
balloon. I was thinking of calling it a balloon.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Well,
at least it’s a nice view from here. We’re passing over Lorland. Macaban’s done
a wonderful job.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">The
fields below were, indeed, pleasingly lush. The castle had been nearly restored
to what it was before Altera Loriod turned it into an architectural nightmare.
“It’s hard to believe it’s been thirteen years since he died,” said Turik.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“And
twenty years since the Battle of the Three Gates. That’s what I’ve been working
on this device for—that and my lanterns. I’d heard about them being used in the
Oriental Coastlands and I thought I’d try to recreate them.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Ah!
So that’s your plan.” He chuckled. “I must admit, this is certainly an
interesting experience. I think we’ve been spotted.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Several
people working in their fields suddenly stopped and pointed up. I couldn’t make
out most of them, but I saw a couple running towards the castle. “Drats, there
goes my surprise!”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“I’m
more concerned about archers. What makes you think they won’t just shoot us
down?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Well,
I actually hadn’t planned on sailing over towns, you know. Plus I <i>think</i> we’re still too far up for an
archer to hit—at least, one with an ordinary weapon.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">The
wind, however, was brisk, and it pushed us north and a bit east. Ellingham and
the signal tower near it were soon under us. Fortunately we seemed to be
sinking as well. The people in that town stopped and stared at us and I could
see the signal tower sending out smoke signals. By this time we were getting
lower and closer to the Keep itself.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Several
winged creatures took aloft from the Keep and began circling us. A bald eagle
approached closely. “Greetings gents. Captain Iolara Banite. What in the name
of the Nine Gods of Light is this thing?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“I’m
calling it a balloon,” I said. “It was supposed to be a surprise for the Duke.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">She
chuckled. “Well, it certainly surprised <i>us</i>.
Are you planning to land?”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“As
soon as most of the hot air in my balloon has gone out. It seems like it will
soon.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“I
hope so! I’d hate it if we ended up in the Haunted Woods or—worse—somewhere
beyond Giant’s Dike!”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Want
any help down? Me and the others could probably help pull you down.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“I
think—yes, we are descending as I hoped. Perhaps you could help to better guide
our landing so we don’t end up on one of the towers or someone’s house?” I
asked.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Captain
Banite laughed and swung away to talk with her troops. Most returned to the
keep except for a couple of dragons. With their help we were able to land
safely just outside the Keep. Explanations were given as to what I had planned
and what went awry.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Fortunately,
the Duke was in good humor about the whole incident. I suggested that we could
use my balloons as a form of transportation and military spying. As far as I
know, the idea is still in consideration.<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Turik
joined me as I went back to my barn. “That was a fun adventure, but you know I
got the strangest idea in my head while we were flying up there.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“Do
tell. I love novel ideas!”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“I
thought that, if it were large enough and properly supplied, we might be able
to sail around the world in it.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">I
chuckled. “That would be an experience! Around the whole world! I wonder how
long that journey would take.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">“My
guess would be at least eighty days.”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">I
smiled and shook my head. Around the world in eighty days? Preposterous! And
yet it had a nice ring to it. “Well, let me work on some plans for a larger
balloon and we shall see!”<span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;text-indent:0.5in;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">It
was nightfall as I finally arrived home. Turik, of course, would be staying the
night. As I went to sleep in my cozy bed, I smiled at the idea of flying around
the world.<span></span></span></p></div>