[Mkguild] "To Steal a Soul" -- Part 5

[Kendo Virmir]

On 8/15/07, Hallan Mirayas <hallanmirayas at hotmail.com> wrote:

> >"This way!"  I ordered, determining the left flank to be thinner than
> >the right.  I charged at the little monsters at full speed, Vale and
> >Vincent on either side, brandishing their swords.  Oddly, the
> >creatures did not charge back, but simply stood there.  I thrust both
> >of my hands forward and fired both burning spheres like cannonballs.
>
> Careful... 'cannonballs' is anachronistic.
>

Oh, blast!

*smacks forehead*

Will think of a different simile. :)

Thanks for the comments and corrections!

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- Virmir
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