[Mkguild] Yvarra and THE LAW

[Michael Bard]

Right now I just want it checked for "canonicity" as it were.

I didk now about the other unicorn, I just didn't know he was still around
the keep.  I've checked with the creator, and apaprently the horn of that
one is kept hidden.  Thus, Yvarra is the only "known" unicorn at Metamor
right now.

Of course, even if Rois was the most well known man in the keep, Yvarra
still wouldn't know of him, so the change would have to be in CSI:Euper as
Jim would have known of Rois...

Michael Bard


> Didn't notice much.  The only thing I'd say is that, in my
> understanding, Yvarra is not the only unicorn-morph in Metamor:
>
> http://mkworld.wikidot.com/characters:rois
>
> Although that isn't entirely fair--since Rois was a unicorn-human
> hybrid before coming to the Keep and then got hit with the transgender
> curse.  Although I understand that Tigner is going to be redesigning
> the backstory because unicorns in the MK world were sort of defined
> out from under him.  Nonetheless, I don't think it best to assume that
> Yvarra is the *only* unicorn-morph out there.  Sometimes your writing
> appears to come across that way.
>
> There are some minor issues with spelling, but I figured you were
> going to go over it at least once more.  Let me know if you want a
> full critique.  Since I know I can come across as harsh in critiques,
> even when I don't mean to be, I leave it up to the author to decide if
> they want it or not.
>
> -Tatsushu
>
> On Thu, Aug 21, 2008 at 3:40 PM, Michael Bard <bard.michael at gmail.com>
wrote:
> > The first complete draft of CSI: Euper is up at
> > http://www.shifti.org/User:Michael_Bard/CSI:_Euper .  Please read and
let me
> > know of any canonity or related problems ASAP.
> >
> > Thanks!
> >
> > Michael Bard