[Mkguild] The Last Tale of Yajakali - Chapter LXV
Ryx
sundansyr at yahoo.com
Mon Nov 10 09:10:23 EST 2008
Well, there was just *SO* much going on in that fight! Forces from four distinct empires (Whales, Marzac, Suttaivasse, and the Merai) thrown into a chaotic crossing of paths.
The Merai were fighting the Merai, keeping them out of the fray on the surface. I had planned to elucidate that through the piece but I missed scoring the mark... I'll detail it further as the work progresses (no, it's not done just yet).
I envisioned the battle as a whole taking place on three planes: In the air between the dragons and the rainbow birds, on the water between Whales and Marzac, and below the water between the Merai. A lot of detail was overlooked as I kept the point of view limited solely to Phil and added a whole lot of confusion in the process. *hah* It was a real interesting, and entertaining, chore.
The dragons actually fought on all three planes throughout.
I hope to clarify some of the holes when Phil and Malger have a chance to sit down and talk with the captain of the Iron King, one Darius Egland.
--- On Sun, 11/9/08, Hallan Mirayas <hallanmirayas at hotmail.com> wrote:
> From: Hallan Mirayas <hallanmirayas at hotmail.com>
> Subject: RE: [Mkguild] The Last Tale of Yajakali - Chapter LXV
> To: "Metamor Keep" <mkguild at lists.integral.org>
> Date: Sunday, November 9, 2008, 10:12 PM
> Awesome. Awesome awesome awesome. :) Phil, when asked what
> ship he wants to use for his new flagship, points to the
> biggest ship in the Marzac fleet and says, "That
> one." What creatures are fighting below the water,
> though? I didn't quite catch what was fighting against
> the merai and their critters. The dragons? Or is that yet
> to be revealed?
>
> Hallan
>
> PS- I was wondering where Malger had gotten off to... :)
>
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