[Mkguild] Nunly's Lutins - part 11
Mythril Vulpes
mythril.vulpes at gmail.com
Sun Dec 13 02:46:26 UTC 2009
On Wed, Dec 9, 2009 at 10:48 PM, Radioactive Toast <quebvar at hotmail.com> wrote:
> Oh. Wow.
>
> That story gave me an irrepresible fit of the giggles. The protagonists who
> just sort of blindly bumble from one adventure to another always bring warm
> fuzzy squeals. Seriously, I loved this.
Thanks.
>
> There were parts where it seemed there could have been more exposition or
> interaction between the characters, and instead the plot just seems to
> dutifully head from point A to B, so it feels like there were some missed
> opporitunities for some characterization that I would have been exited to
> see. But even as it was I loved this story and you absolutely HAVE to
> expound upon this. Expound! I commandeth thee! :)
Well, since you forgot to mention exactly how, I spent some time considering
exactly what to write next. Now I have 3 stories to write before I can get
back to my original one. I do believe this will be fun.
Mythril Vulpes
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