[Mkguild] Saviour

[C. Matthias]

At 06:13 PM 12/8/2009, billy morph wrote:
>I'm not sure this one really works. Even with the previous two 
>stories I'm not sure Hale is quite comprehended without his larger 
>backstory. Anyway, enjoy and if you could take a moment to tell me 
>what you think that would be much appreciated.

Hello again.

Not a bad story, looking at the inevitable consequences of life at 
Metamor in a time of general unrest and unease, something few of us 
have ever need to worry about.

I do think we need to know why Hale can teleport almost willy 
nilly.  I think that's a very dangerous powr that ought tob e better 
understood.

May He bless you and keep you in His grace and love,

Charles Matthias


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