[Mkguild] RE: [TSA] Another Morlunds rules story

[Chris]

I meant to do that! Honest! It was a test and you passed! Yup. That's my
excuse and I'm sticking to it. Hehehe

   Thanks for pointing out the errors. 

-----Original Message-----
From: JF Semmel [mailto:juzbunny at netspace.net.au] 
Sent: Thursday, July 16, 2009 8:50 AM
To: Chris; tsa-talk at lists.integral.org
Cc: 'Metamor Keep'
Subject: Re: [TSA] Another Morlunds rules story

Good short story, but some grammatical errors in the first paragraph threw 
me.

When I read, I can see so much of other people's errors.  The same is not 
true when I write, so I think grammatical errors can occur fairly easily, 
and then be missed when you proofread.

They were just the tense and sex errors below:

The only
thing he could do is crouch on the ground with her hands and feet bound
tightly together by bands of powerful magic.

should probably be:

The only
thing she could do was crouch on the ground with her hands and feet bound
tightly together by bands of powerful magic.

Doesn't take much, does it?

Cheers,
Juz

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