[Mkguild] The Last Tale of Yajakali - Chapter L
C. Matthias
jagille3 at vt.edu
Thu Jan 17 17:54:19 EST 2008
>|> Elvmere chittered angrily at himself,
>|> and then covered his muzzle with both
>|> paws. Neither acolyte turned to see what had
>|> made the noise; they continued on down the hall
>|> and disappeared within a large doorway.
>|>
>|> >>>It occurs to me that Elvmere would make a very good thief!!
>|
>| I'm sure he wouldn't approve of that line of work. ;-)
>|
>Heh, if you liked Elvmere in this scene, you should have a look at the
>re-write Matty did for chapter Forty-Nine. I helped him with that, by giving
>him a couple ideas.
Basically, he suggested Elvmere give into his
raccoon side and ask for some fish to eat as well. It works I think. :-)
>|> >>>Why the replay of past events? In case the readers had forgotten?
>|
>| Well, none of those events happened in 'Last Tale of Yajakali'. Plus,
>| given that this is the start of a new book, I felt it prudent to remind
>| the readers of all that's transpired to this point.
>|
>My word, the Magyars actually felt that a town gave them adequate payment for
>their entertainment services? I'm shocked!
It does happen from time to time. ;-)
>|> Kaspel snapped around, his face pale.
>|> âAh! Thank thee!â Kaspel took it and began to
>|> eat rapaciously. Nemgas stared at the southern
>|> horizon, curious what the archer had seen, other
>|> than the gentle hills, he glimpsed nothing at
>|> all. Nevertheless, he and the others hunkered
>|> closer to the fire to ward off a sudden chill wind.
>|>
>|> >>>How come I have a foreboding about him going into that city?
>|
>| Because you're reading one of my stories. ;-)
>|
>I'm more worried about the revenant that may or may not be following them.
Shhhh! ;-)
May He bless you and keep you in His grace and love,
Charles Matthias
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