[Mkguild] The Last Tale of Yajakali - Epilogue

[Kamau]

C. Matthias wrote:
> Make sure you read Chapter 75 first. ;-)
> 
> Metamor Keep: The Last Tale of Yajakali
> By Charles Matthias
> 
> Epilogue
> 

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Typo
“>So< how was Yajakali going to prevent this?”

 >

>         Floran’s frown turned into a long sigh. “If Master Laurence is 
> to be believed, and I don’t see why he shouldn’t, then I owe you an 
> apology too for what I have said.  I always believer your house to be 
> founded by a traitor to Kelewair.

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Typo
I always >believed< your house to be founded by a traitor to Kelewair.

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   But it seems that it was just one
> more consequence of evil that swept men along.”
>         Arister’s snout spread in a firm grin.  The older ram crossed to 
> Floran’s side and extended a woolly arm. “I may not agree with on policy 
> for the kingdom, but on this we can agree.  There is no reason to bear a 
> grudge against our ancestors or each other.”

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Missing word
I may not agree with >you< on policy for the kingdom, but on this we can 
agree.

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END REVIEW

Very well ended.  This fills some gaps very nicely and sets the stage 
for many more stories to come I would say.  I look forward to those 
stories and hope that in some small way I can lend to some of the future 
stories of the Keep.

Kamau